Songwriter: Jessica Hershey
Featuring: Laurel Wright, Wes Lunsford
Non-production demo
Nice story Jessica.
I think the demo fit well with the lyric.
Only small crit…. I was looking for a payoff in the bridge.
A twist or turn that took her somewhere.
But overall a nice story.
Cheers,
Joe
(I have not been around for a while. I will check out some more of your stuff).
May 01, 2022
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Fifteen minutes of fame
That's all she had to her name
Couple backyard parties
And one county fair
All her friends said you can
But not her old man
Grabbed her guitar and dog
Got the hell outta there
When you have a dream reach for the stars
Even if that means don't stay where you are
The trick to win is to be there in the game
If you want to see fifteen minutes of fame
Fifteen minutes of fame
She found a place to play
Down in lower Broadway
Couple open mics
And one steady gig
Then an agent said hey
That one song you play
Grab some studio time
We'll make it a hit
CHORUS
BRIDGE
If you want it, go get it, it won't come to you
CHORUS
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Nice story Jessica.
I think the demo fit well with the lyric.
Only small crit…. I was looking for a payoff in the bridge.
A twist or turn that took her somewhere.
But overall a nice story.
Cheers,
Joe
(I have not been around for a while. I will check out some more of your stuff).
May 01, 2022
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Stephen Bounds
Catchy melody and I like the storyline!
April 30, 2022
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