Songwriter: Jessica Hershey
Featuring: Laurel Wright
Dreams can be the pipeline to reality, or not.
I dig all feedback. It's how I grow.
Very catchy melody and easy going feel. Lyrics make me sympathize with the singer and show a sense of humor.
June 13, 2021
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Had that dream again last night, the one that makes me cry
I come home to find you gone without even a goodbye
When you are that mean to me I know it's just a dream
'Cause I was wide awake the day you broke up with me
In my dreams you never say why you had to go
In my dreams I make it all my fault
The day you left you told me it was you not me
Still I wish you were here and only leaving in my dreams
It's difficult to concentrate, at work I fell asleep
I had that same bad dream again, the one where you just leave
You really have audacity, nothing's sacred in our lives
I woke up crying at my desk, that's when I realized
Chorus
Bridge
I've heard it said some reasons for recurring dreams may be
Fear and unresolved conflict but those don't apply to me
Chorus
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Hi Jessica,
Great melody and nice twist in the Chorus ... I was not expecting “Still I wish you were here and only leaving in my dreams.” At the end of the Bridge, you can have a nice build back into the Chorus if there’s a rest. Also, there’s an interesting chord progression which makes the arrangement unique on the last line of the Chorus. Nice job! Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 27, 2021
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Very catchy melody and easy going feel. Lyrics make me sympathize with the singer and show a sense of humor.
June 13, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Hi Jessica,
Great melody and nice twist in the Chorus ... I was not expecting “Still I wish you were here and only leaving in my dreams.” At the end of the Bridge, you can have a nice build back into the Chorus if there’s a rest. Also, there’s an interesting chord progression which makes the arrangement unique on the last line of the Chorus. Nice job! Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 27, 2021
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