For female artist. Think Miranda or Julia Cole style. Looking for co-write for music and final polishing. Equal/shared rights upon completion.
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Bartender
Wont ya pour mine over ice
Yea, A single’s fine,
a double's twice as nice
Friends, He broke my heart
when he walked
out last night
I've cried the last tear
I'm gonna cry--
Nah, I ain't wanting
your sympathy
I just came here
to drink
Give
Me….
CH
An ice cold Bud in a mug,
a tall pour from the tap
A bottle with a twist off top
a shooter in a shot glass
A lemon twist, a salted rim,
Bloody Mary with celery stick--
(Pause)
Bring’em all
They're painkillers--y'all
I got a heartache to kick
You see,
His goodbye made me cry
but not why you might think
I'm upset 'cause
Now I have to
buy my own drinks
speakin of drinks
this one's gone
Bartender, that won't do--
I got no plans
to stop at one
Hell, I won't stop
at two
Give
Me…
CH
An ice cold Bud in a mug,
a tall pour from the tap
A bottle with a twist off top
a shooter in a shot glass
A lemon twist, a salted rim,
Bloody Mary with celery stick--
(Pause)
Bring’em all
They're painkillers--y'all
I got a heartache to kick
Next rounds on you!
I'll
Take…
CH
An ice cold Bud in a mug,
a tall pour from the tap
A bottle with a twist off top
a shooter in a shot glass
A lemon twist, a salted rim,
Bloody Mary with celery stick--
(Pause)
Bring’em all
They're painkillers--y'all
I got a heartache to kick
I said
Bring’em all
They're painkillers–y'all
I got a heartache to kick
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