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I always wanted to write a love song in an adult contemporary style...something like Josh Groban might sing. I have always admired the writing of David Foster and enjoy so many of his songs. "When I Am In Your Arms" is my attempt at something in the vein of these two great musicians.
I would love to hear whatever you think of it...good, bad, or indifferent.
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so soft your touch, a breath, a whisper
that calms the waves and soothes the storm
in your light the darkness withers
the healing sun grows bright and warm
and all that rages in me subsides
as a heart of stone and ashes comes to life
I'm alive when I am in your arms
far away from all that weighs me down
when you smile I have everything
my heart begins to sing
when I am in your arms
like summer rain, gently dancing
comes to heal the thirsty ground
when my soul is dry and empty
your tender love comes falling down
I'm alive when I am in your arms
far away from all that weighs me down
when you smile I have everything
my heart begins to sing
when I am in your arms
in your arms I am stronger
in your arms I am free
I'm alive when I am in your arms
far away from all that weighs me down
when you smile I have everything
my heart begins to sing
when I am in your arms
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Hey Bill, It’s a shame that so few in this group actually take the time to give Feedback. Your song is absolutely beautiful. I am not that familiar with Groban’s or Foster’s work, but I think your music and words blend perfectly. Reminds me of something that Andrew Lloyd Weber might write. Well done. I hope others will listen and comment. There is definitely a place for this song. Best of luck.
February 24, 2022
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Allan Rosensweig
Hey Bill, It’s a shame that so few in this group actually take the time to give Feedback. Your song is absolutely beautiful. I am not that familiar with Groban’s or Foster’s work, but I think your music and words blend perfectly. Reminds me of something that Andrew Lloyd Weber might write. Well done. I hope others will listen and comment. There is definitely a place for this song. Best of luck.
February 24, 2022
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