I originally wrote this for my niece to perform at her senior recital. After that, I got together with a couple of Nashville writers and we reworked it and had this demo made.
Whatever feedback you want to leave.
Hi Bill,
As stated by Brent this is not exactly in my wheelhouse.
But I love the message and the song in general. Vocals are awesome. Great jb on the demo.
I liked so much about it.
Only crit is I was really waiting for a Bridge that would knock me offf my feet. And the repeat of those lines was a bit off for me. But maybe that is just me.
Overall some really nice work Bill.
Cheers,
Joe
April 18, 2021
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I used to think that I could never be
could never be someone who's brave
but deep inside something burns in me
like a fire I can't contain
cuz there are dreams that never let me sleep
and give me strength to carry on
It's time to make some headlines
push it to the redline
and take off ...3...2...1
it's a brand new day
and I am rising like the sun
unafraid to shine my light on everyone
and I will chase my dreams across the sky
I will spread my wings and fly
it's a brand new day
I used to think it was impossible
to run my fingers through the stars
now I know I am unstoppable
I'm following my heart
straight ahead, I'm never looking back
stronger than I've ever been
I can go the distance
break through the resistance
never giving up, never giving in
chorus
cuz there are dream that never let me sleep
and give me strength to carry on
chorus
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Hi Bill,
I don’t normally like this style but it’s a really good song. Great Verses that build into the Chorus. My favorite line is “Unafraid to shine my light on everyone.” Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 07, 2021
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Hi Bill,
As stated by Brent this is not exactly in my wheelhouse.
But I love the message and the song in general. Vocals are awesome. Great jb on the demo.
I liked so much about it.
Only crit is I was really waiting for a Bridge that would knock me offf my feet. And the repeat of those lines was a bit off for me. But maybe that is just me.
Overall some really nice work Bill.
Cheers,
Joe
April 18, 2021
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Hi Bill,
I don’t normally like this style but it’s a really good song. Great Verses that build into the Chorus. My favorite line is “Unafraid to shine my light on everyone.” Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 07, 2021
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