Same old story, this guys tried almost everything together her off his mind but drinking is the only thing that works, and his grammar isn’t the best. Currently on hold at Yellow Dog Music.
Who would you pitch it to?
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Drink Drank Drunk
Vs:
Since you been gone baby I've been stuck
Staring at the bottom of a solo cup
Trying to figure out what I gotta do
To get over you
I tried friends, I tried parties
Tried meditation and Pilates
But when you cross my mind
One thing works every time
Ch:
I drink, I drank, till I'm drunk as can be
Then I sink, I sank, I'm sunk down in my seat
Cuz when it comes to us
Don't wanna think, thank, or thunk
So I drink, I drank, till I'm drunk
Vs:
I know this ain't a permanent fix
So far it's one of my best tricks
Cause you stay gone throughout the night
Till morning light
I ain't cussing, I ain't crying
If you ain't gone then I ain't trying
When I see your face
I go to my happy place (Chorus)
Br:
I'll be hanging with Bud and Jack
Till you stop coming back (Chorus)
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Will,
I could get the song to play but the lyrics are fun. My favorite line is “Don’t wanna think, thank, or thunk. So I drink, I drank, till I’m drunk.”
Thanks, Brent
August 31, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Will,
I could get the song to play but the lyrics are fun. My favorite line is “Don’t wanna think, thank, or thunk. So I drink, I drank, till I’m drunk.”
Thanks, Brent
August 31, 2021
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