feel good mid tempo about disconnecting from the world and being in the moment. Guitar vocal demo
Hi Brent and gang,
I am wondering about pitching thoughts on this song. After studying Luke Bryan's latest album, I think it would be a good pitch for him, or anyone who tries to follow the Luke trends. Agree or disagree? Artists here?
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Low Tech
Carrie Cunningham/Adam Byrd
Spent all week waist deep caught up, in everybody’s business
Such an overload of pocket egos it’s, taking up every minute
I just wanna log off and get away from all this fake reality
only one way to say what’s real and what’s not, and it starts with you and me
I wanna a little low tech, kissing your neck
Nothing coming in between
I wanna feel your breath, and my fingertips
Touching more than just a screen
Turnin’ it off, ‘n turnin’ you on, the way connection ought to be,
I wanna little low tech…
Let’s power down all the noise around and get back, to the basics
I’ll grab my old guitar, I’ll sing you a song, Yeah, you know I know all your favorites
You’ve been sending a message loud and clear,
I can see it in your eyes,
All it takes is blowing out the candles, to light up the night
I wanna a little low tech, kissing your neck
Nothing coming in between
I wanna feel your breath, and my fingertips
Touching more than just a screen
Turnin’ it off, ‘n turnin’ you on, the way connection ought to be,
I wanna little low tech
Low tech
Our time is all that matters
Slowing down is what we’re after
Even if the world moves faster
You’ll be all I need
I wanna little low tech,
I wanna little low tech ,
Turnin’ it off, ‘n turnin’ you on, the way connection ought to be,
I wanna little low tech…low tech
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You did a great job with the high tech - low tech contrast in this song. Good melody and singable.
July 26, 2021
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Jim Lane
You did a great job with the high tech - low tech contrast in this song. Good melody and singable.
July 26, 2021
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