I wrote this song driving home at the end of my tour in 2019, somewhere in the middle of California...
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In 14 miles, I’ll have 700 more to go
Then I’ll be more than half way home
I can’t wait to climb out of these miles I’m wearing
At least until I’m back out on the road
I’ll always be a showgirl,
Living on the edge of the road, girl
Just one more night, under neon lights
Is all I need
I’ll always be a showgirl
Too many times, I’ve tried to quit this addiction
But I was born, The life of a musician
I’m not fooling anyone by saying I’m done
Cuz they all know, it’s hell with my condition
I’ll always be a showgirl,
Living on the edge of the road, girl
Just one more night, under neon lights
Is all I need tonight
I’ll always be a showgirl
I’ll always be a showgirl,
Living on the edge of the road, girl
Just one more night, under neon lights
Is all I need
Just one more night is all I need tonight
I’ll always be a showgirl
I’ll always be a showgirl
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Hi Carrie,
Nice drive in the Intro of the song with a good build into the Chorus with backing vocals . Thank you for adding a solo!!! My favorite line is “I’m not fooling anyone by saying I’m done … Cuz they all know, it’s hell with my condition”
Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 07, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Hi Carrie,
Nice drive in the Intro of the song with a good build into the Chorus with backing vocals . Thank you for adding a solo!!! My favorite line is “I’m not fooling anyone by saying I’m done … Cuz they all know, it’s hell with my condition”
Thanks, Uncle Brent
April 07, 2021
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