A tune about how the whiskey can fog a lonely man's brain 
This is a work tape, so lyrical and structural content is where I'd like feedback.
Hi Al, I love this song. I could see Chris Stapleton singing this song. -Pete
June 14, 2021
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Lord knows she'll come to her senses one day
Yeah, she's gonna realize the mistake that she made
She'll understand that there's no one like me
And she'll come a beggin' on her bended knee
CHORUS:
Lies that the whiskey tells
Just lies that the whiskey tells
I get to thinkin' and drinkin' and I listen too well
To the lies that the whiskey tells
Things'll go back to the way that they were
And she's gonna give me the love I deserve
She'll tell me she's sorry for being so blind (or unkind)
And I can leave all of this heartache behind
CHORUS
I know it's over, and she ain't comin' back
The train we were runnin' done jumped off the tracks
Now it's Mr. Jack Daniels, my dog, then there's me
Just looking for something that we can believe
CHORUS
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Hey Al,
Sweet tone ... I’d go with blind in the 2nd Verse. I really like how “I get to thinkin’ and drinkin’ and I listen too well, To the lies that the whiskey tells” sits in the Chorus. Thanks, Brent
June 11, 2021
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Hi Al, I love this song. I could see Chris Stapleton singing this song. -Pete
June 14, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Hey Al,
Sweet tone ... I’d go with blind in the 2nd Verse. I really like how “I get to thinkin’ and drinkin’ and I listen too well, To the lies that the whiskey tells” sits in the Chorus. Thanks, Brent
June 11, 2021
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