Some times it is harder to let go of some things and not others. This girl has a favorite T Shirt she just hates to let go.
Songwriter: Jessica Hershey
Vocalist: Laurel Wright
Feedback is always welcome as I take every piece of advice 100% to heart. This is how I grow.
Hi Jessica,
The first Verse is an awesome opening to the song. Nice build from the Pre-Chorus to the Chorus. The 2nd Pre-Chorus line “Do me one small favor, put it on and bring it back” is a really great way to say come back to me. Great song and you could end with the BR or CH. So many good lines but my favorite is “This old t-shirt has lost every trace Of your seductive aftershave.” Thanks for sharing! Uncle Brent
April 14, 2021
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This old t-shirt has lost every trace
Of your seductive aftershave
Now it's gone I guess it's just a waste
Of time for me to save
PRECHORUS 1
You threw it on my bedroom floor, when we fought, and you said goodbye
That aftershave was the only thing stopping me from crying
CHORUS
I can get over your dreamy eyes
The way it felt when you held me tight
I can get over how our hearts merged
But I can't get over this old T-shirt
I tried to treat it so tenderly
I will admit I wore it twice
And I can't lie it's been my pillowcase
my tears stained it last night
PRECHORUS 2
I folded it up carefully, it's in this paper sack
Do me one small favor, put it on and bring it back
[CHORUS]
BRIDGE
I've always dressed in high fashion
My closet's filled with haute couture
Still I can't deny my passion
When it comes to old t-shirts
[CHORUS]
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Love this song so much!! Amazing lyrics, beautiful melody and vocals. AMAZING!! Great job!
April 14, 2021
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Hi Jessica,
The first Verse is an awesome opening to the song. Nice build from the Pre-Chorus to the Chorus. The 2nd Pre-Chorus line “Do me one small favor, put it on and bring it back” is a really great way to say come back to me. Great song and you could end with the BR or CH. So many good lines but my favorite is “This old t-shirt has lost every trace Of your seductive aftershave.” Thanks for sharing! Uncle Brent
April 14, 2021
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Kim Williams
Love this song so much!! Amazing lyrics, beautiful melody and vocals. AMAZING!! Great job!
April 14, 2021
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