On the road playing shows, and finally listening to the most important voice.
I would appreciate any feedback concerning lyrics or melody.
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Cancelled shows and bus breakdowns
I can't believe i've made it through
All these different cities, same old towns
3am voicemails and missing you
I've covered the northeast to the southwest
Made my livin' with my songs
End of the first set, crowd singing along
Everything's perfect, 'cept for one guest
My 6-string was my voice, now it's a vice
Living the dream comes at a price
Your request
The most important one
Your request
I should've listened all long
Your request
I'm gonna leave alone alone
Your request
Baby i'm comin' home
So I give away my guitar
And drop the mic
Leave a tip at the bar
Goodbye to the bright lights
I pull in our driveway
You standin' on the front steps
I'm done with the highway
Let's make somethin' for that bassinet
Your request
The most important one
Your request
I should've listened all long
Your request
Gonna leave alone alone
Your request
Baby i'm (comin') home
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Hi Fox,
Good song and you’ve got a nice tone to your voice. Do you hear a full band arrangement? Lol … My favorite line is “Let’s make somethin’ for that bassinet.”
Thanks, Uncle Brent
March 24, 2021
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Uncle Brent ...
Hi Fox,
Good song and you’ve got a nice tone to your voice. Do you hear a full band arrangement? Lol … My favorite line is “Let’s make somethin’ for that bassinet.”
Thanks, Uncle Brent
March 24, 2021
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