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The Invisible Way

Ahnataye Brooke

February 17, 2021

Genre: Pop

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Inspired by the works of the Sufi poet Rumi. It is a call to the Beloved and the source of unconditional love, which all starts from within.

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Jackson Lucas

Hi Ahnataye,

I love the lyrics (except for the “newborn baby” line)...
they are extraordinary.

Thanks for sharing something that is so different and interesting than most offerings here.

Best of luck,
Jack

June 14, 2021

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The Invisible Way

Written by Ahnataye Brooke

Between a memory and a dream,
Betwixt the golden dawn, and amber twilight hue
in the silence of the mystery, love returns to you

Over rivers and across the stars, like a dervish time does turn
in the stillness of surrender, as the home fires burn.

By feather and bone, salt and ash the invisible way awakens at last by feather and bone, salt and ash the invisible way awakens at last.

In the quiet of this room, the last midnight begins to break, like a newborn baby dreaming of the waters in which they came.

Above the noise of those warring streets, across the wire two hearts beat
Between a mystery a memory and a dream, return to center where sun and moon meet.

By feather and bone salt and ash the invisible way awakens at last
by feather and bone salt and ash the invisible way awakens at last.

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Jackson Lucas

Hi Ahnataye,

I love the lyrics (except for the “newborn baby” line)...
they are extraordinary.

Thanks for sharing something that is so different and interesting than most offerings here.

Best of luck,
Jack

June 14, 2021


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