Romantic love always describes two people becoming one. I can't live like that. But I would be up for one-and-a-half.
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VERSE 1
Steal my heart
Light my eyes
Take my breath away with your sigh
Write my song
Tame my pride
Turn my world on its side
CHORUS
You’re wise beyond my years
You’re kind to all my fears
I offer all you see
I only ask for you to leave a piece of me
SOLO
VERSE 2
Break me from my endless sleep
I give to you my soul to keep
With no strings, no legal shroud
You’re free to twist my head around
CHORUS
You’re wise beyond my years
You’re kind to all my fears
I offer all you see
I only ask for you to leave a piece of me
For you to leave a piece of me
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