This epic song "On Your Mind" has an all-encompassing lyric that reaches across any genre or gender.
The current version was recorded with an Adult Contemporary vibe and could cross over into pop or alternate country for a longing song about the pain of being taken for granted. Something every man woman and child can relate to. The possibilities for this song are endless.
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On Your Mind
(c) V Walker, J Allison ASCAP
Could I just stay on your mind for a little while (intro)
Busy lines across your face
Always filling up your plate
You don't seem to concentrate on me ... anymore
How did I get so easy to ignore?
Oh I keep waiting
Never saying.... a thing
Could I just stay on your mind for a little while
Stay with you like a song you rewind
Be the daydream taking all your time
Could I just stay on your mind
For a little while
Late at night, you're still awake
So close yet far away
I just cant seem to captivate your love ... anymore
The way it used to be behind closed doors
Oh but I keep waiting
Never saying a thing
Could I just stay on your mind for a little while
Stay with you like a song you rewind
Be the daydream taking all your time
Could I just stay on your mind
For a little while
I cant get you out of my head
Your voice and the last thing you said
Over and over and over again
Could I stay on your mind for a little while
Stay with you like a song you rewind
Be the daydream taking all your time
Could I just stay on your mind
For a little while
What would it take for you to let me stay
Where your mind is not a million miles away
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