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Out Loud

Mary Brennan

January 03, 2021

Genre: Country

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Talking to those who have left the world and hearing their response OUT LOUD.

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Mark Barrett

i Love this song. very well done all around. It touch me!

January 25, 2021

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Mary Brennan

Thanks Mark!  I appreciate the kind words.

January 26, 2021

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Started as a one-way conversation
With a member of the congregation
of Heaven's church that sits up in the sky
Sounds crazy but I'm just saying
I've never been good at praying
but a chat with Dad is just what I needed tonight
He was my biggest fan and the only man
who could knock me down with a stare
he never let me slack, but he had my back
he was tough but he was fair

I was driving home feeling all alone
I started talking to the clouds
As I shared my day, I swear I heard him say "son,
you make me proud." I heard out loud.

That two-way conversation
With a member of the congregation
of Heaven's church that sits up in the sky
May sound crazy but I'm just saying
I like talking way more than praying
that chat with Dad is just what I needed tonight
It’s been so long since he's been gone
but he's right there on my mind
no substitute can fill his boots
or the void he left behind

I was driving home feeling all alone
I started talking to the clouds
As I shared my day, I swear I heard him say "son,
you make me proud." I heard out loud.

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Mark Barrett

i Love this song. very well done all around. It touch me!

January 25, 2021

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Mary Brennan

Thanks Mark!  I appreciate the kind words.

January 26, 2021


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