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Man I love your vocals- hell I’d like to hire you to sing my songs lol. 16 in Summertime has so much potential. I love the sentiment of the lyrics and the melody builds and really pays off in the chorus. But I would love to hear this demoed better, I think this demo quality does you a disservice. Again, your vocals are great but the power guitar muffles some of your lines and although there are some nice production moments- like the ethereal arrangement during the “time went by” segue-the song simply needs a tighter, more consistent band and arrangement around it. Still, I think this is one of the better songs on this website- is def one of my favorites. Great work- oh and please post your lyrics.
February 15, 2021
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good song, I love the part where the music changes “time went by”
September 22, 2020
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Man I love your vocals- hell I’d like to hire you to sing my songs lol. 16 in Summertime has so much potential. I love the sentiment of the lyrics and the melody builds and really pays off in the chorus. But I would love to hear this demoed better, I think this demo quality does you a disservice. Again, your vocals are great but the power guitar muffles some of your lines and although there are some nice production moments- like the ethereal arrangement during the “time went by” segue-the song simply needs a tighter, more consistent band and arrangement around it. Still, I think this is one of the better songs on this website- is def one of my favorites. Great work- oh and please post your lyrics.
February 15, 2021
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good song, I love the part where the music changes “time went by”
September 22, 2020
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