A song I wrote while my Grandma was in the hospital at 90 years old. Tried to keep it more general so that it could be taken into any relationship.
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VERSE
I can see in your eyes
There's a place inside you hold
Locked away
I can hear in your voice
You won't make the choice to go
But don't wanna stay
PRE-CHORUS
But I can feel inside O you're slipping by
CHORUS
O You dont owe me anything
If you're going to go, stop holding on
No you don't owe me anything
If it's time to go, then I'll let you walk away
VERSE
As the days go by
I don't think inside I feel like you do
The memories we share
The only things you can't control
And take with you
PRE-CHORUS
But as you're holding tight, O please keep in mind
CHORUS
O You dont owe me anything
If you're going to go, stop holding on
No you don't owe me anything
If it's time to go, then I'll let you walk away
BRIDGE
I know you see it in my eyes
and I can hear it through your smile You want to be on your way
But just incase that you
Think holding on will prove you don't
No it won't
CHORUS
No You dont owe me anything
You dont owe me anything
If you're going to go, stop holding on
No you don't owe me anything
If it's time to go, then I'll let you walk away
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