This is a great song! Has a very Keith Urban feel. The ending may need some tweaking. It just seems to abruptly end.
August 24, 2020
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Thank you for your comments ive reworked the song and added your suggestions
August 03, 2022
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You wear steel armour
to protect you from the world
thats so unkind
but its left you blind
those scars your bearing
i wont let them tear us apart
ive had your back from the start
just wanna know you better
help me to see whos really inside
We all need love
you act so tough
dont you turn me down
baby please come around
not here to harm you
so take off your steel armour
Your Sword is showing
but im here to battle
for your heart
so drop down your guard
im fighting an army
full of memories from the past
i wish they'd disappear fast
cause every one of them dressed you in silver
but ill strip your fears
watch them fall at last
We all need love
you act so tough
dont you turn me down
baby please come around
not here to harm you
so take off your steel armour
so your surprised im still here
well im not staying clear
ill take that sadness away
We all need love
you act so tough
dont you turn me down
baby please come around
not here to harm you
so take off your steel armour
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Paul, great theme of this song. The vocals were good and the addition of the female vocalist was great. I would like to have heard more of her in the track, maybe harmonies here and there utilizing your panning skills. The chorus could use some reworking. Although telling a good story, the cadence was reminiscent of the verses themselves and didn’t really stand out. I think a bit more production could make this a song worthy of pitch or radio.
August 23, 2020
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This is a great song! Has a very Keith Urban feel. The ending may need some tweaking. It just seems to abruptly end.
August 24, 2020
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Thank you for your comments ive reworked the song and added your suggestions
August 03, 2022
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Paul, great theme of this song. The vocals were good and the addition of the female vocalist was great. I would like to have heard more of her in the track, maybe harmonies here and there utilizing your panning skills. The chorus could use some reworking. Although telling a good story, the cadence was reminiscent of the verses themselves and didn’t really stand out. I think a bit more production could make this a song worthy of pitch or radio.
August 23, 2020
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