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Hi Paul,
You have a nice voice, and the melody of this song is very pretty and fits the subject well.
Good Luck with it, Bob
May 14, 2020
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great soulful voice, nice guitar, good story,, my personal opinion can hear more production, especially in the chorus,,maybe some warm strings or grand piano, definitely add bass, couple moving string lines on bridge, and/or couple more guitar tracks to round out the sound.
But otherwise, very nice.
May 15, 2020
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Very Nice! Great concept “Life Pieces” with puzzle analogies. Great last line. Great vocals, too!
May 27, 2020
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Life Pieces by Clare Steffen & Paul deMarco
Capo 3
V1
D Bm7 G D A
As the winter rolls in... And the sky turns grey … I think of you so far away
Rememberin’ that crooked smile … And the brightness in your eyes
Draws me near across the miles
V2
Em A D
Our time together went too soon... We'd share a smile, a laugh or two,
As we sat under the moon... Playing games of truth or dare ( D D/Db Bm7 A)
G A7
Easy times, without a care
Chorus D Bm7 G D A
Life pieces, crafted from the past... Like a jigsaw puzzle... solved at last
I look and see you everywhere... and the plans that we shared (D D/Db C Bm7 G....A)
Life pieces living on, inside of us
V3
At the start of each new day Lookin' at the shapes,
tucked away Deep in this heart of mine
Waitin' for a light to shine... And find the edges and the sky
Will our love fit as time goes by
V4
I look and see A perfect image in my mind
And I see you as I once did
And I feel like I’m a kid Waitin’ at the door
Till you come home... once more
Chorus
V5
You had to know I loved you.. And now I know you know it is true
Each piece would fit, with you I grew... Into the guy who wants to show
I still love you, this I know
As the winter rolls in... And the sky turns grey
I think of you so far away
Fade Out... Life pieces, crafted from the past...
Life pieces... placed together at last
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I’m not sure why no one ever really responds to people’s work, maybe I’m out of line for doing so? This song is freaking awesome!!! Nice song!!!!
May 10, 2020
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Hi Paul,
You have a nice voice, and the melody of this song is very pretty and fits the subject well.
Good Luck with it, Bob
May 14, 2020
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great soulful voice, nice guitar, good story,, my personal opinion can hear more production, especially in the chorus,,maybe some warm strings or grand piano, definitely add bass, couple moving string lines on bridge, and/or couple more guitar tracks to round out the sound.
But otherwise, very nice.
May 15, 2020
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Very Nice! Great concept “Life Pieces” with puzzle analogies. Great last line. Great vocals, too!
May 27, 2020
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Nathan Hardin
I’m not sure why no one ever really responds to people’s work, maybe I’m out of line for doing so? This song is freaking awesome!!! Nice song!!!!
May 10, 2020
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