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Hi Paul
Had a nice melody to it some good lyrics and seemed to flow nice. Brought me back to some 70’s stuff back in my day! Thanks for sharing
January 06, 2020
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“Change the world” by Clare Steffen & Paul deMarco ©2019
The world is full of the rich and poor
And those in between
If we all want just a little more
We gotta dare to dream
See the future through eyes that shine
Where is the floor if there’s only sky
Oh The River flows out to the sea
And opens up for free
Chorus
If you could change the world
What would you do
What would you give... to start anew
You say you wanna live... So you can be
Who you thought you were
If you could change the world... for you and me
Ohh, for you and me
All this want is not need... can we let go and share
The world is full of fear and greed
So be the one who cares
So many warnings we plan to heed
Give to each other in a time of need
Hold the hand of the hero
Who thinks they can’t save any more
Chorus
It isn't all about me
When we cross that finish line
When I becomes we
Everybody wins
Don’t you think it’s time
Chorus
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Hey, Paul! Thanks for sharing your work with us. I like the groove. The title makes me think of the classic Clapton tune, and that’s a high bar for comparison… with that said, you hook the title pretty well. I like th post-hook “for you and me.” Keep on writing!
January 03, 2020
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Hi Paul
Had a nice melody to it some good lyrics and seemed to flow nice. Brought me back to some 70’s stuff back in my day! Thanks for sharing
January 06, 2020
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Hey, Paul! Thanks for sharing your work with us. I like the groove. The title makes me think of the classic Clapton tune, and that’s a high bar for comparison… with that said, you hook the title pretty well. I like th post-hook “for you and me.” Keep on writing!
January 03, 2020
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