Kind of a typical man cheating story here. Old song that needs some lyrical updating and better music to shine. written by me and sung and melody by J. Sins
any and all feedback appreciated and if anyone has interest in a rewrite just holler
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Her Colt 45
I woke up, you were staring
I could see that you were bearing
Something heavy was weighing on your mind
My heart began to shudder
The words that I muttered
Didn’t work like they did last time
And I was caught red handed
Just like a bandit
Tried, convicted, sentenced all in one
Hell I never stood a chance
Red lipstick on my pants
I took the hint when you got your gun
Chorus:
I was running you were screaming
I was almost at the door
You caught me with the butt end
On my head I hit the floor
I never saw it coming
You took me by surprise
I was ambushed by my baby and her Colt 45
I saw it in your eyes
You had the devil deep inside
You shouted out a warning
I had no place left to hide
You took aim and pulled the trigger
Heard a click and I figured
It must not be my day to die
I was laying on the floor
Shaken from the horror
Wondering when the next was gonna fly
I cried like a baby in hopes that maybe
You would forgive me one last time
And I was caught red handed
Just like a bandit
Tried, convicted, sentenced all in one
Hell I never stood a chance
Red lipstick on my pants
I took the hint when you got your gun
Bridge:
When I opened up my eyes
I saw an angel in disguise
You wrapped your arms around me
And told me “no more lies”
Chorus:
I was running you were screaming
I was almost at the door
You caught me with the butt end
on my head I hit the floor
I never saw it coming
You took me by surprise
I was ambushed by my baby and her Colt 45
I was ambushed by my baby and her Colt 45
Staring down the barrel of her
Of her Colt 45
Written by Mike McCorison 2011
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