Are you romancing correctly? If the last kiss ends in a sigh, it looks so.
Andy and all feedback appreciated
Hi James
Nicely written song, nice melody and easy to listen to. Well done! Thanks for posting.
December 07, 2019
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When our last kiss ends in a sigh © Jim Green 2019
V1
When I see the light, fall across your face
It takes me to a different time, and a different place
Like the day we said I do, and I’ve always done
Looking in your eyes I feel your love
[PC]
But, I’m a Little bit awkward, little bit backwards
Am I doing this right or wrong
[Chorus]
From Our first kiss, In the morning light
To Our last kiss, late late at night
With just one look, from your sweet green eyes
I know right away if I’ve done it righ-igh-ght
When our last kiss ends in a sigh
V2
I feel sunshine, even in the rain
I feel happiness, even when there’s pain
I feel all the love, I could ever want
I knew it right from the start
[PC]
[Chorus]
Any man knows, what it’s all about
From the pretty little smile, to the childlike pout
I’ll always know, if I’ve done it right
When I pull away and I hear that sigh
[Chorus]
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Hi James
Nicely written song, nice melody and easy to listen to. Well done! Thanks for posting.
December 07, 2019
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Noora S
Great
)) Sounds good :D
November 27, 2019
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