Trying to look at both sides of a controversy
How to make this more generalized
Corey, thanks. Good catch on the first verse, I’ll fix that on the recording.
Thanks for the listen.
July 14, 2019
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So You Could Take A Knee by David Martin
I am a Union soldier
I was killed at Gettysburg
I'm a teenage boy in jail because
my daddy's just too poor
I'm black and I want to know
How police look at me
I'm the widow of a man who died
To keep this country free
Chorus
Say a prayer when you kneel down
for every state for every town
When the flag is raised and you drop down on one knee
Please remember, say a prayer for me
I am a little girl in church
killed by a coward's bomb
I'm Navajo and Cree and Sioux
and tribes completely gone
Chorus
I 'm a man with five good friends
I lost in Viet Nam
My father fought at Normandy
My uncle at Bataan
Chorus
Woody said this land
Was made for you and me
I know there's room for all of us
To live our hopes and dreams
I'll say a prayer for you
Please say a prayer for me
We're all in this together
From sea to shining sea
Chorus
I'll say a prayer for you
Please say a prayer for me
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Heart felt good singer songwriter song
I would look at the last line of the first verse
Other than that good guitar sounds good
I liked the melody
July 14, 2019
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Corey, thanks. Good catch on the first verse, I’ll fix that on the recording.
Thanks for the listen.
July 14, 2019
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Corey Bourque
Heart felt good singer songwriter song
I would look at the last line of the first verse
Other than that good guitar sounds good
I liked the melody
July 14, 2019
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