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I would like to see the lyrics. Most of us are looking at this at work and keeping the sound low. This feels more like a country song. I like songs that are nostalgic about the old times. I think the song needs a hook. “I remember the Time” is not enough of a hook for me.Too generic. Also, I would like to see a key change at the chorus to make it stand out more and then come back to the verse. Cool lead guitar and general vibe to the song!
May 23, 2019
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Tripp Williams
I would like to see the lyrics. Most of us are looking at this at work and keeping the sound low. This feels more like a country song. I like songs that are nostalgic about the old times. I think the song needs a hook. “I remember the Time” is not enough of a hook for me.Too generic. Also, I would like to see a key change at the chorus to make it stand out more and then come back to the verse. Cool lead guitar and general vibe to the song!
May 23, 2019
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