I wrote this song about a lady friend of mine. I was a little frustrated for her, watching her relationships and watching the struggles that guys put her through. Her tough time passed eventually, and my hope is when someone listens to this song, they will understand that bad times will pass.
Story and singing...Structure, any feedback is appreciated. Lyrics
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Now She's been out there on her own, Hoping she can make it last
And She's been looking for a reason, why there love is in the past
She thought there life would last forever, but as they do they often change
and she'll be hoping that tomorrow, will bring a bright sunny day
But now she's holding onto nothing she's, trying to find her way
She's holding onto nothing for a change
And she'll be hoping and praying that it'll turn out right she's holding onto nothing through the night.
If he'd just take the time to call her, then she could make it through the night, If he would only say that he loves her then everything would be alright.
So now she's holding onto nothing she's trying to find her way, She's holding onto nothing for a change. and she keeps hoping and praying that it'll turn out right she's holding onto nothing through the night.
still she's holding onto nothing she's trying to find her way She's holding onto nothing for a change and she keeps hoping and praying that it will turn out right she's holding onto nothing through the night.
Now She/s been out there on her own
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Kay Williams/Mott
I love your conversational, story songs!
January 19, 2018
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