Sometimes the cowboy in us comes out in our songwriting, and this is one of those songs. This is a song about reflecting back on past choices, and the ensuing regret that sometimes follows.
NOW SIR YOU ARE WHAT I CALL A SONGE WRITER ——-I AM A 70 YEAR OLD DISABLE STROKE VICTIM I AM A VIET NAM VIET WHO BEEN TRYING TO GET A HIT FOR OVER 50 YEARS——JUST WANT SAY I ADMIRE YOU——YOU ARE GREAT !!!!!
January 07, 2019
Hey Russ, I appreciate that pal, and I appreciate your service. I am not far behind you buddy. I am 65 and also did a couple of tours in Vietnam and have been reaching for that elusive big cut my whole life. I is meeting folks like you that make it rewarding.
January 08, 2019
Marvin, one of the things a well written song does is transport the listener to a time and place conveyed by the songwriter. This song does that to a T.
Congrats.
George K. Gibson
January 14, 2019
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There’s a hole in his heart - her memory walks through
A whole lotta past - he’d like to undo
Too many bruises - and busted bones
And too much time - spent healin’ alone
Tonight on the porch - of his cabin he sits
And remembers how he loved the west
The oats he’s sown - records he’s broke
And all the horses he’s rode
But he’d trade all the titles - ropes and the reins
The saddles, buckles, trucks and all the fame
For one night with that woman - he wouldn’t let get close
That woman whose lovin’ he now needs most
Yea, he’d give it all back if he could Lord knows
He’d trade all the horses he’s rode
Chasin’ gold from a saddle - hell bent on career
He couldn’t see past - the next horse or steer
All they are now - are souvenirs
Collectin’ dust - year after year
So tonight on the porch - of his cabin he sits
And remembers how he loved the west
The oats he’s sown - and letters she wrote
And all the horses he’s rode
But he’d trade all the titles - ropes and the reins
The saddles, buckles, trucks and all the fame
For one night with that woman - he wouldn’t let get close
That woman whose lovin’ he now needs most
Yea, he’d give it all back if he could Lord knows
He’d trade all the horses he’s rode
He’d trade all the horses he’s rode
I’d trade all the damn horses I rode
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Hi Marvin, another awesome song and kind of reminds me of Desperado as far as the story/message.
Love the melody and chord change here: “The saddles, buckles, trucks and all the fame”
and on “Now needs most.”
very nice!
December 27, 2018
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Hey Russ, I appreciate that pal, and I appreciate your service. I am not far behind you buddy. I am 65 and also did a couple of tours in Vietnam and have been reaching for that elusive big cut my whole life. I is meeting folks like you that make it rewarding.
January 08, 2019
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Marvin, one of the things a well written song does is transport the listener to a time and place conveyed by the songwriter. This song does that to a T.
Congrats.
George K. Gibson
January 14, 2019
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Reid Yamamoto
Hi Marvin, another awesome song and kind of reminds me of Desperado as far as the story/message.
Love the melody and chord change here: “The saddles, buckles, trucks and all the fame”
and on “Now needs most.”
very nice!
December 27, 2018