A saucy little love song with a 'Lady Chatterley' twist...
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Green Fingers
She ran her Green Fingers
Up and down my spine
The way her perfume lingers
I wish that she was mine
There’s a slow number
I’d like to take her to
So that we can work out what it is her green fingers do…
Hey hey…
Brushwood bonfire smouldering on a summer night
There’s a lone wolf howling and somehow it don’t feel right
There’s a full moon glowing, glinting in the corner of my eye
And the winds in the honeysuckle vines make me moan and sigh…
Chorus:
Green Fingers
Up and down my spine
Green Fingers
I wish that she was mine
Green Fingers
She’s making me grow
She’s taking me to places I’m not sure I ought to go…
Hey hey…
Chorus:
I like my coffee strong and black, she likes her coffee white
I drink it all the blooming day, it keeps me up all night
Green Fingers
Up and down my spine
The way her perfume lingers
I wish that she was mine
There’s a slow number
I’d like to take her to
So that we can work out what it is her green fingers do…
Hey hey…
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