Get past the first 8 seconds
Then hold on for the ride.
This is a song about love, kind of. But get up out your seat and dance. Spin those wheels on that backroad. Put on those sunglasses cause this neon lights gettin' hot
I'm just requesting. 1 feedback for every 60 views.
Don't be shy. Say what you think. I recorded this in my basement. If you want to say that. You can.
All comments welcome, All is appreciated.
Please remember.
I Love YOU
Thank you for your feedback Ani. Was it to fast or just do you think I need to work on enunciation?
April 29, 2018
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Lol… that was definitely a little out there and crazy but fun! I also couldn’t understand you and had to read along with the lyrics you posted. I’m not sure how this would be marketed but I’m sure it could be marketed somehow after some refinement. It was a little bit incoherent, I won’t lie, but maybe that is what you are shooting for, being absolutely delirious in love. Definitely different than anything else I’ve heard on here.
April 30, 2018
Thanks for the feedback Haydee. I’m thinking about slowing it down a little so it’s clear.
April 30, 2018
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You can tell the truth or you can tell a lie
But I can always see it in your eyes
When you laugh and when you cry
There’s something in your way
Cause we’re never ever gonna never ever say never
Cause never is forever and it’s never for the better
Whosoever thinks they're clever never had another lover like you.
Na na
We’ll never ever let it sever like two birds of a feather
Fell in love in stormy weather and you know it’s for the better
And we’re always gonna always gonna fall in love
Yeah yeah.
We can always be however if whenever is whatever
In our hearts a hidden treasure that you know we’ll find together
Cause we’re always gonna always gonna be in love
We’ll always be in
L.O.V.E Y.O You me C.R.A.Z Why you make me crazy crazy in love with you
Na Na
It’s
L.O.V.E Y.O You me C.R.A.Z Why make me crazy crazy in love with you
I’m crazy in love with you.
A song ain’t a song if you can’t sing alnog
And a dance ain’t a dance without two
And time takes a toll when you’re broken inside
I’ve been a broken inside over you.
Cause we’re never ever gonna never ever say never
Cause never is forever and it’s never for the better
Whosoever thinks they're clever never had another lover like you.
Na na
We’ll never ever let it sever like two birds of a feather
Fell in love in stormy weather and you know it’s for the better
And we’re always gonna always gonna fall in love
Yeah yeah.
We can always be however if whenever is whatever
In our hearts a hidden treasure that you know we’ll find together
Cause we’re always gonna always gonna be in love
We’ll always be in
L.O.V.E Y.O You me C.R.A.Z Why you make me crazy crazy in love with you
Na Na
It’s
L.O.V.E Y.O You me C.R.A.Z Why make me crazy crazy in love with you
I’m crazy in love with you.
Your never ever gonna never ever say never
Your never ever gonna never ever say never
Your never ever gonna never say never
Cause it’s
L.O.V.E Y.O You me C.R.A.Z Why make me crazy crazy in love with you
I’m crazy in love with you.
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I enjoyed the song. I really couldn’t understand any of you lyrics though. I had to read them.
April 28, 2018
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Thank you for your feedback Ani. Was it to fast or just do you think I need to work on enunciation?
April 29, 2018
1
Lol… that was definitely a little out there and crazy but fun! I also couldn’t understand you and had to read along with the lyrics you posted. I’m not sure how this would be marketed but I’m sure it could be marketed somehow after some refinement. It was a little bit incoherent, I won’t lie, but maybe that is what you are shooting for, being absolutely delirious in love. Definitely different than anything else I’ve heard on here.
April 30, 2018
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Thanks for the feedback Haydee. I’m thinking about slowing it down a little so it’s clear.
April 30, 2018
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Ani Bergman
I enjoyed the song. I really couldn’t understand any of you lyrics though. I had to read them.
April 28, 2018