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When I was younger I felt desperate in life, but I took comfort from knowing someday I would be in a better place and write a song looking back on my life throwing back in time positive energy. I am now that person. This idea of a loop was inspired by Kate Bush's suite THE NINTH WAVE:
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MESSAGE TO ME
By Happy Ron Hill
If you could just look forward
To see what you could achieve
What would it take for you to believe
To see the face of all you could be
If you could just reach back
To face who you once were
What would you say about what you've learned
From all the times…. you got burned
Would you Travel back in time
If only in the mind
For this is my message to you
Just look ahead in everything you do
You will find your way home
And you won't always be on your own
For this is my message to you
Made myself a vow
It's what kept me alive
That if I could look forward with a smiling face
One day I’d look back from a better place
Move ahead in time
And always walk that line
DOUBLE CHORUS
For this is my message to you
Look ahead in everything you do
You will find your/the way home
And you won't always be on your own
For this is my message to me
Your future's right here if you just believe
Just let these words haunt you
And you’ll find your way through
It will just take time
It will just take time
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fun video here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQWBtUlGTjc
February 12, 2017