Sitting on the lawn at a country show wondering "where did all the real cowboys go"....????
Great song, Debby. You are an awesome lyricist. Let’s connect or hopefully you are in Nashville soon.
February 06, 2018
This is a great song, interesting that you mention Jason Aldean in the song, I hear him singing this, Not too sure if it would be his type of song though since it seems to be sung from a Woman’s point of view, could have been a great tune for gretchan Wilson when she was in her prime..still might be
February 06, 2018
Great job. Pitter-pat was a hang up for me. Only because it might be more ironic funny saying something like, heart attack. Because you were so shocked that a man was wearing a cowboy hat. The irony is that there are not real cowboys on the front lawn. For instance when someone refrences something shocking and they say, it about gave me a heart attack.
Pitter-pat is cute though. Thank you for sharing. Awesome job.
February 07, 2018
Thank you! I loved hearing all your feedback! Im going through a family crisis right now but I promise to give you all feed back on your songs as well asap.
February 08, 2018
I have listened to some of your Material Debbie, including those posted on soundcloud
“One more Day” is simply beautfull
February 10, 2018
Hi Debbie
GIRL!!!
Love every bit of it. The rhythm, the melody and the lyrics fit perfectly (and I agree 100% with the lyrics).
Got me hooked. So damn good. Well done.
Could you not see Carrie Underwood singing that?
Best wishes for it’s success.
Cheers
Sonya
February 12, 2018
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Cowboy Hat
by
Debbie Convoy and Danielle Clashman
(debsk8r@aol.com) (soundcloud.com/debbie-convoy)
Sittin' on the lawn at a country show
Wondering where'd all the cowboys go?
The country boy look, has changed it seems
To snap-backs, v-necks and skinny tight jeans
Lookin' so hot as the noon day sun
There just something cool about an ol' Stetson
Chorus:
Give me silver belt buckles and boot cut jeans
Button down shirts with rolled up sleeves
My heart starts to racin’, it goes, “pitter-pat”
When I see a man in a cowboy hat
We all know, the silhouettes on the screen
Like Garth Brooks, Toby Keith and Jason Aldean
They each have a brim, that fits their name
To take them off, would be a crying shame
Perfectly placed, just above their eyes
Oh, that sexy look, gives me butterflies!
Chorus:
Give me silver belt buckles and boot cut jeans
Button down shirts with rolled up sleeves
My heart starts a racin’, it goes, “pitter-pat”
When I see a man in a cowboy
(Bridge)
Keepin’ it country, keepin’ it real,
Now, that's what I call sex appeal!
The temperature’s rising on my thermostat
‘Cause, ain't nothin' hotter than a man, in a cowboy hat!
(Chorus)
Give me silver belt buckles and boot cut jeans
Button down shirts with rolled up sleeves
My heart starts to racin’, it goes, “pitter-pat”
When I see a guy in a cowboy hat
Oh it makes my heart go pitter-pat
When I see a man, in a cowboy hat
1
Great song, Debby. You are an awesome lyricist. Let’s connect or hopefully you are in Nashville soon.
February 06, 2018
2
This is a great song, interesting that you mention Jason Aldean in the song, I hear him singing this, Not too sure if it would be his type of song though since it seems to be sung from a Woman’s point of view, could have been a great tune for gretchan Wilson when she was in her prime..still might be
February 06, 2018
1
Great job. Pitter-pat was a hang up for me. Only because it might be more ironic funny saying something like, heart attack. Because you were so shocked that a man was wearing a cowboy hat. The irony is that there are not real cowboys on the front lawn. For instance when someone refrences something shocking and they say, it about gave me a heart attack.
Pitter-pat is cute though. Thank you for sharing. Awesome job.
February 07, 2018
1
Thank you! I loved hearing all your feedback! Im going through a family crisis right now but I promise to give you all feed back on your songs as well asap.
February 08, 2018
1
I have listened to some of your Material Debbie, including those posted on soundcloud
“One more Day” is simply beautfull
February 10, 2018
1
Hi Debbie
GIRL!!!
Love every bit of it. The rhythm, the melody and the lyrics fit perfectly (and I agree 100% with the lyrics).
Got me hooked. So damn good. Well done.
Could you not see Carrie Underwood singing that?
Best wishes for it’s success.
Cheers
Sonya
February 12, 2018
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