I heard the initial melody from a friend in the UK and I was so inspired I wrote a verse and chorus in 30 minutes and asked him if I could use the melody...to which he said yes. I have since added to it as it was quite short and changed a few things
I know this is quite ruff and would LOVE any and all feedback. I see it as a possible new first dance wedding song...that is where I am leading it anyways.
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Verse 1
When I saw you from across the room - 9
Your beauty, before my eyes, left me, paralyzed - 12
When you looked my way, I could hardly breathe - 10
My heart pounding, wanting you wanting me - 11
Chorus
So tell me what do/can I say, has heaven come my way?
Oh could this really be, for someone like me?
To find strength in life’s gifts, is a treasure our hearts give
I’ll love you more every day as our love leads the way
Verse 2
Not looking for love but it came my way - 10
The first time, our eyes met, set me back, took my breath - 12
Now here we stand, about to change our lives - 10
Hand in hand, exchanging vows, you are my life - 11
Chorus
So tell me what do I say, has heaven come my way?
Oh could this really be, for someone like me?
To find strength in life’s gifts, is a treasure our hearts give
I’ll love you more every day as our love leads the way
Verse 3
When the years have passed, and we’re still in love – 10
Your beauty, will be engraved, in the family that we raise -14
When you look my way, only love I’ll see - 10
Our hearts pounding, loving you, loving me – 10
Chorus
So tell me what do I say, has heaven come my way?
Oh could this really be, for someone like me?
To find strength in life’s gifts, is a treasure our hearts give
I’ll love you more every day as our love leads the way
I’ll love you more every day as our love leads the way
Bret Sinclair / Tony True
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This is so cool! Love the the melody and the unexpected chord changes!
January 16, 2018
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Jason Street
This is so cool! Love the the melody and the unexpected chord changes!
January 16, 2018
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