Here's a female Christian pop song I wrote with Sam Mizell.
Brent Baxter or is it Brent Lavigne? Lol nah just messin. This one does remind me a lot of a Maroon 5 style. I found myself head nodding and foot taping right from the start. I almost didn’t even pay attention to the lyrics because the beat was pretty grooving. Once I started paying attention to the lyrics they were really great but then again you are a fantastic lyricist so I wasn’t taken by surprise! I really dug it. In MHO, I was expecting more out of the chorus music, I thought the lyrics were great and the lyric melody was great but I felt like the music needed to be a little more in the front I guess you would say, not drowning out the vocal but I thought the dunt dunt dunts would have pulled me in more emotionally if they were more prominent. I dont know if Im even explaining that right cause Im certainly no critic but thats my 2 cents. Really dug it just the same. Love the diversity that you have as a writer.
July 16, 2018
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(Brent Baxter, Sam Mizell)
What you got is limitless
Don’t you know it’s bigger than the ocean is
What you got is more than real
Than this universe spinning like a big wheel
Can’t be, can’t be contained
Don’t be, don’t be afraid
When the clock runs down
And the shadows come ‘round
Don’t let them put you out
CHORUS:
Don’t you know, you got the sun inside
Shine it out to the world tonight
Take the light of His love
Light it up like a fire in the dark
In your heart
You’ve already got the sun inside
Don’t have to wait until the morning light
Time is just ticking away
So carry the flame
Show the world, show the world
That undeniable fire
Yeah, that undeniable fire
What you got is so contagious
Sing it out no matter where your stage is
Love’s melody, so powerful
It’s gonna draw them in by the crowd full
Can’t be, can’t be contained
So just give, just give it away
Oh, what love will start
From a single spark
Just open up your heart
CHORUS
It’s too beautiful to hide
A fire, so don’t be afraid to shine
CHORUS
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I like the verse about the ocean and the universe. The music is great too.
January 21, 2018
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Brent Baxter or is it Brent Lavigne? Lol nah just messin. This one does remind me a lot of a Maroon 5 style. I found myself head nodding and foot taping right from the start. I almost didn’t even pay attention to the lyrics because the beat was pretty grooving. Once I started paying attention to the lyrics they were really great but then again you are a fantastic lyricist so I wasn’t taken by surprise! I really dug it. In MHO, I was expecting more out of the chorus music, I thought the lyrics were great and the lyric melody was great but I felt like the music needed to be a little more in the front I guess you would say, not drowning out the vocal but I thought the dunt dunt dunts would have pulled me in more emotionally if they were more prominent. I dont know if Im even explaining that right cause Im certainly no critic but thats my 2 cents. Really dug it just the same. Love the diversity that you have as a writer.
July 16, 2018
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Andrea Bergman
I like the verse about the ocean and the universe. The music is great too.
January 21, 2018
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