A song comparing the rapture to the biggest "Grand Opening" ever because the bible says that on that day the graves of the saints will burst open and they'll be caught up to be with Jesus!
Jim,
I would agree with Sarah. I like the concept, but I think speeding it up some may be worth trying. It will keep me from wondering. I too thank you for sharing!
July 23, 2013
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I really like it! The recording’s a bit dated sounding, but I love love love your singer. And the fullness of all the harmonies in the chorus!
I really dig the structure. I might’ve sped it up a few clicks, since I think it has a potential to drag a little at this speed. Love the concept of a Grand Opening. Thanks for sharing!
July 22, 2013
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Jim,
I would agree with Sarah. I like the concept, but I think speeding it up some may be worth trying. It will keep me from wondering. I too thank you for sharing!
July 23, 2013
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Sarah Spencer
I really like it! The recording’s a bit dated sounding, but I love love love your singer. And the fullness of all the harmonies in the chorus!
I really dig the structure. I might’ve sped it up a few clicks, since I think it has a potential to drag a little at this speed. Love the concept of a Grand Opening. Thanks for sharing!
July 22, 2013
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