I wrote this with Jeff Pardo.
(c) Writers Infinity (ASCAP) / Simple Tense Music (ASCAP)
I hope ya'll like it!
Country isn’t completely my genre but this feels like a solid song with a sense of humour - it made me think of the TV show Nashville. A really well produced demo and great vocal. I agree with Gregg, I can see this getting cut and appealing to a commercial market.
October 19, 2017
Lyrically, is seems sound. The only thing I would say, is that with the imagery of the hair, the lets and the view. You say, you like a women with a longneck. I’m pretty sure you are referring to beer. Although, some people and it’s true, I live in Utah. There are some people who might not know what a long neck is without saying bottle. If that’s what you are referring to. For some reason I can’t get the image of a women with a long neck out of my mind. So I’m wondering if that will carry over to other people. Or if the people that drink won’t mind and that’s where it will be played. I do have to say though, a long neck on a women can be attractive. Just a thought.
January 22, 2018
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(Brent Baxter, Jeff Pardo)
Some guys like that long, long hair
Red, brunette or blonde
Some men dig those long, long legs
They really turn ‘em on
I won’t lie to you
I enjoy the view
But that ain’t what makes me sweat
CHORUS:
I like a woman with a longneck
Honky tonkin’
Tall and cool, golden tan
Like the beer in her hand
Country attitude
Laid back and smooth
Turns my head, takes my breath, I’m a mess
For a woman with a longneck
A woman with a longneck
Ain’t nothing like a girl who’s right at home
In a rundown redneck bar
Who breaks some rules, kills at pool, does what she wants to do
And throws back PBR
When she puckers up her lips
And takes a little sip
That’s as sexy as sexy gets
CHORUS: [REPEAT]
Baby, rock them jeans or that little black dress
It’s all hot to me, but what I like the best
Is the crazy buzz I get
From a woman with a longneck
Can I buy you a drink, baby?
CHORUS: [REPEAT TWICE]
A woman with a longneck
A woman with a longneck
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Well done Brent & Jeff .. I would be surprised if ya didn’t get a cut on this one brother ... blessings on ya <><
October 17, 2017
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Country isn’t completely my genre but this feels like a solid song with a sense of humour - it made me think of the TV show Nashville. A really well produced demo and great vocal. I agree with Gregg, I can see this getting cut and appealing to a commercial market.
October 19, 2017
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Lyrically, is seems sound. The only thing I would say, is that with the imagery of the hair, the lets and the view. You say, you like a women with a longneck. I’m pretty sure you are referring to beer. Although, some people and it’s true, I live in Utah. There are some people who might not know what a long neck is without saying bottle. If that’s what you are referring to. For some reason I can’t get the image of a women with a long neck out of my mind. So I’m wondering if that will carry over to other people. Or if the people that drink won’t mind and that’s where it will be played. I do have to say though, a long neck on a women can be attractive. Just a thought.
January 22, 2018
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Gregg Shively
Well done Brent & Jeff .. I would be surprised if ya didn’t get a cut on this one brother ... blessings on ya <><
October 17, 2017