Another song from a musical idea where the young man is starting to notice his girls mind games.
HI Robert,
Thanks for your feedback. I saw the start exactly like you did, a bit `stop and start`.
Although I am not a vocalist the recording i made and sent to the studio was `flowing`and this is a continuous source of irritation with songs sent when the price is good, otherwise you have to pay hundreds of pounds more to monitor the song .Can`t win, can you? Mabey I can relocate to your neighborhood and use some of your sounds that you generate, regards.
August 04, 2017
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Nice song Barry. Interesting melody. I thought (and maybe you did too) that the opening lines were too restrictive for the singer. It needed more free flow and then when the song starts in full it would have more impact. But this is a nice song and a typical Barry Guy genre.
August 03, 2017
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HI Robert,
Thanks for your feedback. I saw the start exactly like you did, a bit `stop and start`.
Although I am not a vocalist the recording i made and sent to the studio was `flowing`and this is a continuous source of irritation with songs sent when the price is good, otherwise you have to pay hundreds of pounds more to monitor the song .Can`t win, can you? Mabey I can relocate to your neighborhood and use some of your sounds that you generate, regards.
August 04, 2017
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Robert Lloyd
Nice song Barry. Interesting melody. I thought (and maybe you did too) that the opening lines were too restrictive for the singer. It needed more free flow and then when the song starts in full it would have more impact. But this is a nice song and a typical Barry Guy genre.
August 03, 2017
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