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Hey little Robin

barry guy

May 28, 2017

Genre: Pop

More by barry


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The song was written about someone in an `empty space` in their life


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Brent Baxter

Hey, Barry!  Thanks for sharing this song with us!  I like the overall vibe of the song, but I’m more of a concrete-lyric guy, myself.  I’m having to work so hard to find a point of connection with the lyric, that I’m not really feeling it.  But if I just don’t pay too much attention to the lyrics and just go with the general vibe of the song and the chorus, I dig it more.

I’d personally like it more if the verses were more clear.

Hope that helps.  Please pay it forward by commenting on another writer’s song.  Thanks!

May 28, 2017

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Hey little Robin

Written by barry guy

HEY LITTLE ROBIN

ALWAYS A HAND IN AN EMPTY SPACE THAT I CAN`T REACH TODAY
ALWAYS AN OFFERING TO AN EMPTY FACE THAT I CAN`T READ
SOMEONE SAID YOU HAVE TO GIVE YOURSELF LONG BEFORE YOU FALL
AND IF IT`S TRUE THEN I`M JUST WILLING NOW TO GIVE IT ALL
TO GIVE IT ALL

HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU FLY TO ME NOW
HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU COME TO ME NOW
JUST A CRUMB FOR YOUR COMPANY
IT MAY SEEM QUIET SMALL BUT IT`S ALL OF ME

PASSAGEWAYS ON AN EMPTY FLIGHT ARE WITH ME EVERY DAY
RANDOM SHAPES ON A RAINY NIGHT
THAT I CAN`T SEE
SOMEONE SAID YOU HAVE TO GIVE YOURSELF LONG BEFORE YOU FALL
AND IF IT`S TRUE THEN I`M JUST WILLING NOW TO GIVE IT ALL
TO GIVE IT ALL


HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU FLY TO ME NOW
HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU COME TO ME NOW
JUST A CRUMB FOR YOUR COMPANY
IT MAY SEEM QUIET SMALL BUT IT`S ALL OF ME

AND IT HURTS, AND IT HURTS, AND IT HURTS SO MUCH
AND IT HURTS, AND IT HURTS, LITTLE ROBIN
AND IT HURTS, AND IT HURTS, AND IT HURTS SO MUCH
AND IT HURTS, AND IT HURTS, LITTLE ROBIN

(MID SECTION MUSIC)

HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU FLY TO ME NOW
HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU COME TO ME NOW
JUST A CRUMB FOR YOUR COMPANY
IT MAY SEEM QUIET SMALL BUT IT`S ALL OF ME

HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU FLY TO ME NOW,
HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOIU FLY TO ME NOW
HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU FLY TO ME NOW
HEY LITTLE ROBIN, WON`T YOU FLY TO ME NOW



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Brent Baxter

Hey, Barry!  Thanks for sharing this song with us!  I like the overall vibe of the song, but I’m more of a concrete-lyric guy, myself.  I’m having to work so hard to find a point of connection with the lyric, that I’m not really feeling it.  But if I just don’t pay too much attention to the lyrics and just go with the general vibe of the song and the chorus, I dig it more.

I’d personally like it more if the verses were more clear.

Hope that helps.  Please pay it forward by commenting on another writer’s song.  Thanks!

May 28, 2017


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