Things will always work out....this one is a solo write.
Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanks James! That was Mason Douglas….he’s a terrific singer, and makes great demos. Appreciate your feedback!
May 03, 2017
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“walking, running, flying”... I really like that line! Great job on this solo write Dave!
May 10, 2017
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I enjoyed this one Dave, Nice solo write. Nice to hear an uplifting positive upbeat song which I always enjoy. Nothing to fix in my opinion 
I Loved the song Dave
May 11, 2017
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Things don’t look good
Aint turnin out, way I thought they would
Made a few messes, whole lotta mistakes
(Yeah but) I won’t get down
Long as I keep drivin, my luck’ll turn around
Won’t be long, and I’ll catch a little break
Chorus
Before you know it
Winds of change start blowin
And Blue Skies, will push that rain, outta my way
And I’ll finally see the top of the hill
I’ve been climb, climb, climbin
And start walkin, runnin, fly……in
Hard times gonna fade, into easy goin
Before you know it
Before you know it
Look around me
Gotta bunch of friends, gotta bunch of family
All that love, means nothing to fear
(so I’ll) stay strong stay tough
Blessins comin, soon enough
Blink of an eye…it’ll be here (Chorus)
Bridge
Before you know it
Those doors will swing open
And what used to take forever
Is gonna fly by (Chorus)
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Great sounding demo. Who’d you use for the vocals? Only two things I could suggest looking at as most of this, especially the melody, is really good. The chorus felt a little long. Also, maybe use the bridge for a little more of the picture as to what has been tough for this person. That’s my two cents anyway. Hope it helps.
May 02, 2017
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Thanks James! That was Mason Douglas….he’s a terrific singer, and makes great demos. Appreciate your feedback!
May 03, 2017
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“walking, running, flying”... I really like that line! Great job on this solo write Dave!
May 10, 2017
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I enjoyed this one Dave, Nice solo write. Nice to hear an uplifting positive upbeat song which I always enjoy. Nothing to fix in my opinion
I Loved the song Dave
May 11, 2017
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Great sounding demo. Who’d you use for the vocals? Only two things I could suggest looking at as most of this, especially the melody, is really good. The chorus felt a little long. Also, maybe use the bridge for a little more of the picture as to what has been tough for this person. That’s my two cents anyway. Hope it helps.
May 02, 2017
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