There is no way I could have been prepared for parenthood....but I can dream.
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Hi, Allyse! Thanks for sharing.
Sounds like it’s coming from a real place. Oh, what a red-eyed, feet-dragging place that is! I don’t miss it…
I like some of the imagery - like the tired metronome. Dig some of the specifics like “bringing meals and helping hands.”
However, it was hard to dig more deeply without the lyrics in front of me. I think there’s some cool stuff in there- keep on sharing!
March 22, 2017
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Hi, Allyse! Thanks for sharing.
Sounds like it’s coming from a real place. Oh, what a red-eyed, feet-dragging place that is! I don’t miss it…
I like some of the imagery - like the tired metronome. Dig some of the specifics like “bringing meals and helping hands.”
However, it was hard to dig more deeply without the lyrics in front of me. I think there’s some cool stuff in there- keep on sharing!
March 22, 2017
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