Two people meet on a train station platform, and the magic is instantaneous! The song has a catchy chorus hook and builds to a big crescendo at the end. With the right producer and arrangement, I can see this working for one of the 'new Nashville' chart toppers!
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THE FIRST TIME I SAW YOU, WAS ON PLATFORM THIRTEEN
I KNEW I WAS HEADING FOR SOMEWHERE I HAD NEVER BEEN
YOU LOOKED GOOD - YOU LOOKED FINE, & I WANTED YOU FOR MINE
I CAUGHT YOUR EYE, AND YOU GAVE ME A SMILE
I FELT MYSELF BLUSH, LIKE AN EMBARRASSED CHILD
WE WERE JUST MEANT TO BE, FOREVER YOU AND ME…….
(Chorus)
WE’RE LIKE SMOKE AND FLAMES, BLOWING THROUGH THE HURRICANES
WE’RE LIKE A PAIR OF KIDS, PLAYING SILLY PLAYGROUND GAMES
TWO AS ONE, JUST HAVING FUN, SMOKIN’ HOT LIKE A FIRED GUN
WE’RE LIKE SMOKE AND FLAMES, BLOWING THROUGH THE HURRICANES
I HAD TO MEET YOU, BEFORE YOU BOARDED THAT TRAIN
BECAUSE I KNEW I WOULD NEVER GET THIS CHANCE AGAIN
I RAN THE STEPS – I NEARLY FELL, I HAD A LOVE, I HAD TO TELL
YOU SMILED AGAIN, AS I CAME NEAR
MY WORDS S-S-STUTTERED AS MY HEART FELT THE FEAR
YOU TOOK MY HAND, AND FLASHED A SMILE
I WAS YOURS RIGHT THERE, AND IN JUST A WHILE…..
REPEAT CHORUS
SOLO
CHORUSES OUT
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