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Smoke & Flames

Ross Hemsworth

February 18, 2017

Genre: Country

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Two people meet on a train station platform, and the magic is instantaneous! The song has a catchy chorus hook and builds to a big crescendo at the end. With the right producer and arrangement, I can see this working for one of the 'new Nashville' chart toppers!

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THE FIRST TIME I SAW YOU, WAS ON PLATFORM THIRTEEN

I KNEW I WAS HEADING FOR SOMEWHERE I HAD NEVER BEEN

YOU LOOKED GOOD - YOU LOOKED FINE, & I WANTED YOU FOR MINE


I CAUGHT YOUR EYE, AND YOU GAVE ME A SMILE

I FELT MYSELF BLUSH, LIKE AN EMBARRASSED CHILD

WE WERE JUST MEANT TO BE, FOREVER YOU AND ME…….


(Chorus)

WE’RE LIKE SMOKE AND FLAMES, BLOWING THROUGH THE HURRICANES

WE’RE LIKE A PAIR OF KIDS, PLAYING SILLY PLAYGROUND GAMES

TWO AS ONE, JUST HAVING FUN, SMOKIN’ HOT LIKE A FIRED GUN

WE’RE LIKE SMOKE AND FLAMES, BLOWING THROUGH THE HURRICANES



I HAD TO MEET YOU, BEFORE YOU BOARDED THAT TRAIN

BECAUSE I KNEW I WOULD NEVER GET THIS CHANCE AGAIN

I RAN THE STEPS – I NEARLY FELL, I HAD A LOVE, I HAD TO TELL


YOU SMILED AGAIN, AS I CAME NEAR

MY WORDS S-S-STUTTERED AS MY HEART FELT THE FEAR

YOU TOOK MY HAND, AND FLASHED A SMILE

I WAS YOURS RIGHT THERE, AND IN JUST A WHILE…..


REPEAT CHORUS

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