The good die young so if we never get it right we can be together for a long life!
Hey, Jamie! Thanks for sharing this with us. LOVE starting the lyric with “I make mistakes…” It grabbed me right off the bat. To me, it seems the title should be “Die Old.” I got a little lost on the structure… Is the chorus just the vocalizing? Either way, I like the vibe and the thought. Cool stuff. I’d love to hear more!
January 20, 2017
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I make mistakes just like everyone
I've messed up thousands of times
but I keep on going
I fail time after time
I keep on hoping
someday I'll get it right
Why does the good seem to die young?
They must have figured out exactly how to live
But there is no secret
its about self-control
I always forget
Thats why I'll die old
You are my light you are my muse
The world sees the best of me because of you
You have a beautiful soul
Loved by all you meet
Thank God you still mess up
so you will spend a long life
with me
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Hey, Jamie! Thanks for sharing this with us. LOVE starting the lyric with “I make mistakes…” It grabbed me right off the bat. To me, it seems the title should be “Die Old.” I got a little lost on the structure… Is the chorus just the vocalizing? Either way, I like the vibe and the thought. Cool stuff. I’d love to hear more!
January 20, 2017
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Julie Field
great song Jamie! I really enjoy this one a lot. Great vocals too!
August 03, 2016