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Haydee Ahrens

December 12, 2018

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on I Didn't Catch Her Name

Melody is interesting at points. Loving the harmonies and guitar. I’m having a hard time connecting completely because the lyrics just don’t seem to capture me. Like you said, this concept has been done many times. This melody though… sounds timeless like Pink Floyd in many parts… good... Read More

December 12, 2018

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Say

Sounds a bit haunting. Definitely a song that could do well stripped down like this or with more elaborate production. It is very suspenseful. Your vocals are so beautiful, I had to listen twice. It could easily be placed in a dramatic/romantic film.

August 29, 2018

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Make My Heart

Okay, so I listened again, and yes, the second time you sang the word return doesn’t seem necessary but I could see how it would give the song a lift. Maybe there is a way to tweak that one minute detail. I still like the song a lot, it... Read More

August 29, 2018

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Make My Heart

I love the lyrics and say Amen. The end of the verse didn’t seem congruous melody-wise, the way you finished off singing “return. Don’t know it seemed incongruous, but other that tiny detail, I enjoyed the song tremendously and felt it ministered to me. I’m gonna listen... Read More

August 29, 2018

Haydee Ahrens gave feedback on Stuck in County Again

I should not be laughing, but I am. > ) This Song should be on Broadway or cut somehow. Excellent descriptions. Good structure, flow, and variation in melody. This could be on that show Orange is the New Black.

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