Ani Bergman gave feedback on The Dance

I love your voice and your songs. I guess I don’t quite get your second lyric.  Will make things happen otherwise not might. It just is a little awkward, but I am a new musician so consider the source. This is not very good, but maybe “Will make... Read More

Ani Bergman gave feedback on Indian Land

It definitely is interesting and it definitely sounds like a rock song. The only advice I could give (new musician, who am I, consider the source) is it sounds like the same chords throughout the song.  (If so, I’ve done this too).  Maybe you could change that.... Read More

Ani Bergman gave feedback on Girl with the Guitar case

Sometimes the chorus doesn’t flow as nicely (who am I, new musician, consider the source).  Maybe add 1 syllable to the chorus lyrics.  Like “You hold on and keep the faith.” and maybe another word to the line “it may end up in a bittersweet song.” But, it... Read More

Ani Bergman gave feedback on Set Up For A Fall

It is cool.  I like it.  I don’t know about the line “Got me set up for a fall.” I think you mean “falling in love.” But, if you don’t listen to the rest of the lyrics and just listen to the end chorus. It makes... Read More

Ani Bergman gave feedback on You Still Make Me Broken

I liked that it was unique. I might put the chorus again after the bridge.