Joined: February 3, 2018
Frank Likes: 56 Songs
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on When All Else Fails
For me it’s not really clear what kind of character he is. Is he a friend? Is he in love with her? Is he an ex? Or Jesus? The melody in the chorus feels a bit stale for me, could be more cheerful. I like the first verse, however... Read More
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on New
I’m not sure if words and music fit together. It’s a nice melody, but it sounds rather sad, while the lyric is more cheerful. If you add a sad emotional lyric to that melody you can make people cry.
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Redneck Girl
I like the idea. I’m missing a bit structure in this song. I cannot really recognize a chorus or refrain. Sometimes it’s also a bit wordy. Your singing is not that bad, but it’s too much in front of the mix.
Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Christmas From Prison
Never stayed in prison, but I can relate to. Nice!