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Frank Renfordt

February 09, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Christmas From Prison

Never stayed in prison, but I can relate to. Nice!

February 09, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on When All Else Fails

For me it’s not really clear what kind of character he is. Is he a friend? Is he in love with her? Is he an ex? Or Jesus? The melody in the chorus feels a bit stale for me, could be more cheerful. I like the first verse, however... Read More

February 09, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Lonely

Very nice idea!

February 09, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on New

I’m not sure if words and music fit together. It’s a nice melody, but it sounds rather sad, while the lyric is more cheerful. If you add a sad emotional lyric to that melody you can make people cry.

February 09, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Redneck Girl

I like the idea. I’m missing a bit structure in this song. I cannot really recognize a chorus or refrain. Sometimes it’s also a bit wordy. Your singing is not that bad, but it’s too much in front of the mix.

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