Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Audition

Hi Evan, cool title, has made me curious. The first part of the song feels a bit disconnected to the chorus. It would be great if you could find a way to implement the audition/show metaphor already in the first verses, than the lyric would gear more towards the... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets

Cool song. Limp Biskit came to my mind. I like the chorus most. The pre chorus part sounds kinda weird. The lyric of the first verse and pre chorus feels to me a bit cliche, falling behind the rest of the lyric. In this genre you can be less distinct.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on What She Don't Know (Version 2)

Hi Tommy, the structure now is way better than the first version. I still feel uncomfortable with the line ‘I hold her close till she falls asleep as if I love her still’ - probably it’s because I wouldn’t be able to act like this. But that may... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I'm Having Too Much Fun Tonight

It’s not the kind of music which blows me away, but I love your awesome stories and ideas - really great stuff!

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Rise Again (Country Pop Mix)

Hi Lisa, I ‘ve listened to your song and l think it is well structured and fits quite well into the modern Country - Pop genre. I think you cold improve the song if you would bring in some more contrast. Every line of the song is more or less... Read More