Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Hold On

Hi Sandra, I like the lyric, some very nice images. Maybe it needs some tweaks, some lines are a bit wordy (second line of the chorus and second line of the second verse). Just try to skip the line ‘I told you that way back then’ in the chorus -... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I Wish That I Was Him

Very emotional song, good work.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Start All Over Again

Hey Bob, I am sorry to say this, but for me the whole song drags. The music as well as the lyric. Also the chorus doesn’t sound like a chorus, it’s more like a bridge, you need a bridge only once. I don’t know if you need... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I'll Remember You, Love, In My Prayers

Nice job! Nothing to complain about it!

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Unworthy

Hey Bob, great jazzy tune! I’m not really into Christian music, much too often the lyrics are just simple and cheese cliches, your lyric here is a bit different and more original. Good work, I think it would be worth to record it with a better singer. The piano... Read More