James Kelso gave feedback on Every Word

Thank you Christine, I really appreciate your listening and commenting!

James Kelso gave feedback on Pray While You Wait

Great song idea and message. A couple of critical thoughts…Would love to hear this with a different melody, vocal, and arrangement. Feels a little outdated, like the 90’s maybe. Maybe there are cut opportunities in this genre still so maybe that’s what you were shooting for. That’s... Read More

James Kelso gave feedback on I Don't Fight Alone

Thanks Rick and Lisa, great feedback. this is why I am loving being a part of the Frettie community. Really helpful feedback! I will take another crack at that chorus I think!

James Kelso gave feedback on Rise Again (Country Pop Mix)

Hey Lisa, thanks for posting! At first blush this feels more like a easy listening/pop song than a country pop song. I like the melody and the production quality of the song. If you are looking for suggestions for improvement I would say a couple of things… 1. I would... Read More

James Kelso gave feedback on I Don't Fight Alone

Thanks Jayne, great feedback. As I think about it now, from the perspective of unstable/stable or tension and resolution I can see how making 3 and 4 match 1 and 2 would feel more stable/resolved, which is how this chorus is supposed to be functioning. Tension in the verse-resolution in the chorus.... Read More