Graham Donahue gave feedback on SHE UP AND LEFT ME STANDING

The song seems pretty good overall. I would say the wording is a little off on the first verse. It seems that it should read, “She broke my heart and WENT away,” instead on “GONE away.” Also the last line “And with my life now shattered, and I keep to... Read More

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Better Life

Thank you for the feedback! It is not actually about my dad (I changed the description to specify that), so perhaps that is why it comes through that way. I just felt the story worked best being told from the kid’s point of view. I am not sure how... Read More

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Coffee and Jesus

Great song. I like the way you were able refer to coffee and Jesus with the same words. I can’t find anything right away that I would change. Great job!