Carlos Tabora gave feedback on FALL

I like the song. The message is hopeful and inspiring. The melody is pretty, but I agree with Frank that the harmonies might have more impact if only used during the Chorus. I do like how you sing “Fall” with descending notes in the chorus. Very catchy. Good luck with... Read More

Carlos Tabora gave feedback on Miracle Pill

This is a really great song. Love the concept and everything flows smoothly. Good prosody between the music and lyrics. Love the little tag/twist on the last chorus (when life goes uphill). Wouldn’t change a thing.

Carlos Tabora gave feedback on You Are My Everything

Cool, smooth track. I’d really like to hear the melody on this as I’m more of a music person. It’s hard to critique the lyrics without hearing the melody but will give a try. I see that you’re trying to create a resolution by the end... Read More

Carlos Tabora gave feedback on Shine (Don't Hide Your Light)

HI Marcus. I agree that even with the secular lyrics, the music and groove still feels like it should be for a Broadway show. Like Brent, I’d like to hear your other lyrics that had more imagery and detail in it. Having won the Gospel/Christian category in the... Read More

Carlos Tabora gave feedback on Love Happens

Hi Sarah. I listened several times and really like the song. I think the verses and chorus are great. They flow well and and have a nice pace to them. But the bridge seems a little too wordy, long-winded or maybe some of the phrasing needs to be tweaked. For... Read More