Joined: January 1, 2014
Benny Likes: 29 Songs
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on You're All Mine
Beautifully done. Something to make the chorus stand out a little from the verses might be nice, maybe some harmonies. I wonder if the implied possession of “you’re all mine” would be off-putting to some of the fairer sex.
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on The Fall
Nicely done. I really love the lines: “The tracks on her arms lead from Heaven to Hell Asking favours of God while courting the Devil” I think the music is not nearly as dark as the lyrics though and would love to hear something more sinister.
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Pyromaniacs
Great imagery. Having been married to my high school sweetheart for 43 years I know that people find different ways to make it last. I just don’t know how, at your young age, you knew that! You truly have the heart of a poet!
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Angel With Buffalo Wings
ZERO responses. Guess that is the reason Frettie is dieing on the vine.