Just a little poetry about an afternoon of observing everything around me. It wasn't meant to be deep, it was meant to be relatable. It was written with the idea of a coming-of-age theme. Hope you guys like it.
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Relatable is right. That’s what I like about this song. So many cool imagery that this creates as well. I also love the line “Gone is the boy, what’s left is the man”. +1 for the cool Instagram shot too. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to hearing your other stuff.
June 08, 2013
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Dennis Field
Relatable is right. That’s what I like about this song. So many cool imagery that this creates as well. I also love the line “Gone is the boy, what’s left is the man”. +1 for the cool Instagram shot too. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to hearing your other stuff.
June 08, 2013
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